我是在无法用初中水平写，我用高中水平写好吗？

DearLiHong

HavingreceivedyourletteraboutyourtroubleinlearningEnglishthismorning,Iwillbeveryhappytosharemypersonalexperiencesonlearningit.

WhenifirststarttolearnEnglish,Ijustfinditverydifficulttomaster.Forexamplerecitingnewwordsandanalysinggrammarsarethemosttroublesomecases,what'smore,nervousasIam,Iamveryafraidofmakingmistakes.Butsoon,IunderstandthatonlybypracticingEnglisheveryday,canIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.Besides,withthehelpofmyteacher,greatprogresshasbeenmade.Now,IstronglysuggestyouseizeeveryopportunitytopracticeyourspokenEnglishandiamsosurethatyouwillcatchupwithyourclassmatessoon.

Lookforwardtoyourreply.

SincerelyWangDan

这片文章是我原创，本人刚刚参加了高考，平时作文一直保持在23或24。请你相信我的水平。文章有很多亮点：倒装句，被动句，连接词，固定短语。我想可能有点长了。但是我认为你应该加点分咯，我是原创哟。