写作思路：不要平铺直叙地进行，要注意及时地、不断地变化描写的角度，使描写更加具体，给读者主体化之感。做到条理清楚、自然、明白，不杂乱，要倾注自己的思想感情。正文内容：

Afewdaysago,theteacheraskedusaquestion:classmates,whatmakesyoumostcannotstand,willmakeyouangertotheextreme?Thestudentsspeakouttheitchforatry,inmyopinion,theanswer.

Lonelysaid:momwentouttoplaywithmymotherandme,scoldmeisthemostunbearableforme,makesmeangrytotheextreme!Theteachernodded,smiledandgesturedforhertositdown.

MingQingsaid:whenIsawmydadandmomheldmybrotherandsister,andIwillbejealous,then,ismorethanIcanbear,theanger!Theteachersmiledandsaid:well,veryhonest!

Therewasalotofpeopleexpresstheiropinions.Whentheteachersmiledandcalledupintheseatforme,thestudentsareinvariablytolooktome.

Mylittlehead,thoughtforamoment,thenraisedhishead,theteacherthesmilingeyes,unhurriedgroundsays:Ipersonallythink,lossoffreedomorbeingbetrayedallotherIcannotstand,orevenangertotheextreme!

Theteacherapprovinglynoddedatme,hersmilingeyes,imperceptibly,smilehasmorestrong.TheclassmatesareallsurprisedtobeAgapeandtongue-tied,terrified,alongtimetosayaword.

Lossoffreedomandbeingbetrayed???UntilnowIstillwonder,whatisforcingmetosaythewords?

SomestudentsmaythinkIsilly,right?However,thetimeshouldnotbefromapupiltothespokenword,seemsquitereasonable,evendonothaveaflavor!